This is a poem I wrote ages back,but I think this is one of the best I've done so far.So I'm posting this in here.Looking forward to rave-reviews......;).
The NO I feel,is waiting
Waiting on your sweet sweet lips
Is the only reason
My resolve just slips n slips.
The NO I feel,is waiting
Is cause for all my sorrow
Neither can I tell u of my love
Nor can i wait for tomorrow.
The NO I feel,is waiting
I'm sure will break my heart
So,even when I want to draw you close
We still are twin souls apart.
The NO I feel,is waiting
I never could bear
Though my love for you is boundless
And your beautiful face,so fair.
The NO I feel is waiting
Is driving me mad with frustration
But soon I'll overcome my fears
And then,my love,will come celebration.
The NO I feel,is waiting……………
MJ here,20-something Engineer(??),the proverbial "wise-crack" and "born-procrastinator";
This is where I rant and rave about life in general,as and when I encounter it.But there's gonnabe a liberal dose of my creations(poems n s***)..*I already see scared faces out there*...stuff that interests me,from various sources,and more...So enjoy ;or try to..;)
From: God's Own Country
About me: Nobody's gonna get a chance to blame me for self-praise...so u better ask my pals...;)..or rather,let my blogs speak for themselves.
Wednesday, February 23, 2005
I'm out of ideas for tonight ;so...
posted by One Bizarre Scribe at 12:41 PM
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6 Comments:
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This is gonna be a critical one.
I liked the starting and ending.
But in between you became a little artificial.
Well if the emotion you said is real enough. Then go ahead tell it to the person whoever it might be.
Get it over with. Dont think about what the person is going to tell.
Or you could do some PR exercises and then proceed. Either way plan and go ahead. :D DOnt take too long. -
At 11:16 AM,
>:D< :((
Man I really connected to those emotions...I guess it is an old poem...or do u still feel that way? I know I do ;try as I might to deny it.